Monday 11 November 2013

It’s not Gonna Write Itself

Okay, so I’m just fucking this up more so.
Here’s the thing, I’m getting a headache from this short story. I’m not sure what’s going wrong with it. What I’m doing with it. Or more so, what the fuck I want out of it. But it’s here, and it’s in my head, while it’s not giving me anything new.
So I thought, well, I’d let you have a quick look and see if you… I don’t know, but I bitch and I thought, well, maybe you’d like a sample.
 
Anyway, it’s not edited, it’s not research edited, and no one but me has read it before you get your hands on it. Oh, yeah, and it flips a little near the end, but it’s for a reason I’m not sure if anyone else well get but me.
 
Book A
 
Unedited blurb
Can Shane finally bring Joel Home?
 
Joel Kidnel had a great head; he had always been good at turning off his personality and become someone else completely. He should have used this gift to become an actor—it would have paid a lot better. Instead he took it and used it be become one of the better undercover cops in his unit.
 
The thing was, after three years of being a ‘bodyguard’ of one of the ruthless men in town, Joel is having trouble coming back. Maybe he did like that life a lot better than the barren one waiting for him at home.
 
Then entered a little bit of a man claiming to be able to help Joel out. And who knows, maybe he can in a way neither men had thought of.
Maybe Shane can finally bring Joel home.
 
 
Chapter One
 
What’s there to say, I’m fucked in the head. Yeah, that’ll be a good place to start.